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Lyricist's Insomniatic Madness

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I guess this is the part
Where I start to write something clever
And surrender my mind to metaphors
But before I dive right in
And let this begin, just let me say
That someday I'll escape these places
Seeing unfamiliar faces with different expressions
Filtering dirty transgressions. We all have things to hide,
Different rules to abide by, blindly following what we're told,
No matter how old we may be or how little we remember.
I can't wait until December. One more month until a new year,
Change from first to second gear, full speed ahead,
One day I may be dead and all that will be left,
A grave bereft of meaning or flowers piled high,
Hold your sigh, don't waste your breath
On a man's death that was always afraid to live,
Never willing to give of his self to others,
Forget brothers in arms, I never meant any harm,
Sound the alarm and erase all of this, hit delete,
I feel so incomplete, big hole in my chest,
Failed to impress, can't take this anymore,
Say hello to the floor and close my eyes,
Surprise, surprise never able to sleep, head filled with lies,
Used as a disguise from the truth I can't bear,
Never did care to open my ears and listen,
To your rendition of how you see me,
Feel free to state your opinion,
My idea has dominion over yours and always will.
Time to take a pill and a pill and a pill,
Sign my will and end this standstill.
NOTE: YES THIS DOES HAVE A SPECIFIC RHYME SCHEME. CONGRATS IF YOU FIGURE IT OUT. SHOULDNT BE THAT COMPLEX REALLY.

day ? in a row. its alot. just leave it at that. i'm trying to work on a collab with someone and i'm a horrible partner so ive yet to write my part. sorry partner. you know who you are and i feel bad. didnt know what category to put this in. but oh well.

i honestly dont know what this is. i just started writing because i was bored and tired and yes this is complete shit but its ok. im fine with that fact. i just needed to write something to keep me from insanity.

feedback and comments would be cool. feedback on rhyming and flow. not much else matters ya know.

these words are my heart. apparently a delusional psychotic heart.
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Amaya-K-Lilium's avatar
I really like the rhyming scheme. It's different and makes the flow very unique, and it also goes well with the insomniac theme/feel. You've got some really cools lines, like "Change from first to second gear, full speed ahead", "Say hello to the floor and close my eyes", "Never did care to open my ears and listen to your rendition of how you see me", and "Time to take a pill and a pill and a pill".