this is now day 15 in a row of writing something each day. some days ive even submitted multiple things xD
i'm so tired right now that all the words are growing blurry and i'm losing sight of where i was going with this.
comments and critiques please. feedback on concept, emotion, metaphors, imagery, and the ending. i still suck at endings. i think this one might be perfect though if you pay close attention to the wording.
these words are my heart. my extremely mangled heart.